This is a work-in-progress wedding program for my sister's friend who is getting married this summer. I was going for a more modern look that is still feminine yet not too overly feminine. I wanted the decorative lines to be delicate to contrast from the type that is more modern and masculine. The picture is just filler for now. I am using Archer & Bodoni Poster Italic(for now) for the two fonts. All of the loops are a first round test, I am open to altering them, adding to them, and taking away from them. I will be working with Bethany to make some hand-rendered type for their names at the top possibly. Opinions? I'd love feedback from you guys!
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I like it but I almost think there are too many loops... maybe see what it looks like with a straight border and loops only around the picture or vise-versa. but thats just me.. i really like it so far bub!
ReplyDeleteI think "Renee & Matthew" should be a tad smaller, maybe the photo too. I just don't like how close the photo is to the border. Maybe the loops should be smaller, rather than the photo. Hard to say. Otherwise, I think it has a great look. It's original and fun, yet appropriate. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think if you took out the border curlycues to the left and right of the pic it would look less busy. I like the size of the photo, but for some reason, the font bothers me. Not sure if it's too bold or if it's the style. I didn't find it to be masculine. Really like how you did date, time, place. Great start!
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